Twist story revision

                                 Who are you?

“Oh, Nooooooo! please don’t, don’t catch me! Help me!!!!!!! ” I wake up at midnight because of a bad dream. 

“Where am I?” oh, I am siting on my chair, and there is my French book right in-front of me.

 “Oh, god, what time is it? I must have nodded off at my desk.” 

I turn out my lamp, and try to go to bed. 

The room is dark and cheerless. I feel a deadly coldness steal over me. 

 Wait….. I feel something behind me, What’s that? There is a fearsome girl sitting in a rocking-chair by the window. She looks pale and unhealthy, with unwashed hair and sunken cheeks. My heart is like a jumping rabbit, and I can heard it quite clearly. Then something seems to snap in me.I feel like I can hardly move my muscle; I begin to perspire heavily, and my brain goes blank. All of a sudden, Her face is colorless, and she starts to float, I image that she wants to catch me and eat me. I starts to run, as fast as I can. My feeling is like I am a champion of the olympic games. The monster is about to stretch out her hand to grab me, but she misses. “AAAAAA, no……..mom, mom,  help me, help me, someone is sitting on the chair and wants to kill me!” I screamed loudly and dripped to my bed. I snuggle tightly under my quilt in order to feel protected and block out the world around me.

“ What’s wrong, Jen?Are you ok?” my mom says. She turns on the light, “ There is no one sitting on your chair, just your red dress and shoes.By the way, please close your window when you sleep. It's super cold outside.”