BEST!TWISTS

                            

Last week, we wrote our own creative story. Most of them did a great job on their writing, There are three stories I like the most, which are Leo’s, Nina’s and Amanda’s. Their wring  not only have different shinny points, but also have pretty unexpected ending.

First of all, I want to talk about Leo’s( “ Where is my phone” ) creative writing.I love the story most, because it really knocks me out. He basically is talk about a story that when he have a phone call with his mom, and then he try to find his phone. Finally, he realize that the phone is on his hand. To be honest, I always do this kind of “stupid” things. So, I feel like his story is really close to my genuine life. That’s the most tremendous diverse than other people’s story. 

Second, Nina’s story have the same twist with Amanda and mine. We all talk about something non-existent things. Like ghost, monster…..However, our styles are very different. Nina focus more on the character parts, which is the“ghost”. She write a mass of words and sentences to describe his outlook and positions. For instance: “The man wears all black like The Lord Voldemort. He wears a hat, and it seems like he is staring right at me. I can't see his face because of the darkness.” While when I read this part, I feel like there is a picture drop into my brain, I can easily image the shape of that men.  Beside those, she also write her own feeling, "He...hello..." I try to say something to break this silence. What if he is a good ghost? Or what if he wants to kill me? My heart is like a jumping rabbit, and I can hear it bumping very clearly.”  According this sentence we could notice that she uses the language and structure  ( the word: “ He..Hello..”)  to described the atmosphere that her wants to express, instead of just several adjectives or verb. What’s more, this sentence give me a feeling that she is super nervous, and my heart along with her writing. 

Last but not least, I want to talk about sophia’s writing.Her twist are super dramatic and funny. At the begin part of her writing, she builds a feeling like her father was a perfect man, very gentle and caring. ("Don't you feel cold?" he asks tenderly, with his hands caressing my head. At that second, I feel that he transforms into the best character of a Korean drama who can launch the sunshine from his eyes. )but, when we look at the ending;  we could  find that her story has a pretty strongest contrast between her father and her. For example , the sentence “ "You naughty girl." his voice is full of love and care” and “ he zips up the zipper from his chest to the neck.” This strong comparison makes the story become more dramatic and amusing. 

To sum up, I think everyone have done a pretty good job in this project. Since we can find their own shinning points in the story. They all write many details as they can, and  improve a lot. This is also my first time to write a creative story. To be honest, I feel super nervous when I first read this assignment, because I feel like  I can’t do it well. But…… finally, i did it!!!Thus, this particular creative story are already became my precious memory.