Final-portfolio

I am not a vegetarian, I am a dessertarian( first blog post) 

My 1st time cooking experiment!

Do you like Thai food? 

Do not skip your breakfast anymore! 

Let's do it together! ( last blog post) 

There are few things I want to revise: topic sentence, thesis, hook, organization, title, details, grammar, sentence structure, clarity my ideas, etc. Seems a lot, LoL~

 Besides those basic error, I wanna try to start another Brian storm for each blog I wrote. When I read my blog post, I found that most of them seems more "surface". In the blog, I focus more on the cooking steps. So, this time, I want to write more deep thinking. I can add more personal experice, or describe more the taste, etc. 

Also, I must have to think about a good conclusion. I had glanced though it, I feel like almost every blog that I posted did not have a great conclusion. Thus, I have to spend more time to revise my conclusion.