In class writing

 In this essay, I think I am good at describe the object in this painting. I probably write all the details I am seeing,such as color,different object.... Also, I write a lot of  my own opinion about this painting. However, at the first, I have totally no ideas how to write the good thesis. May be I am not good at summary, so I just struggle with the thesis. Finally I got the perfect thesis.  If I  have more times, I think I will go over the essay again, and add more details and fix some grammar mistakes. Also, I will work on some deep thinking, and try to think more about the artist. Why the Van Gogh Use this color or why he drew this painting or what is he really think about at that time.